Haiku

Discussion in 'Lounge' started by Pete1950, Aug 9, 2012.

  1. Not how I thought it was going to end :wink:
     
  2. Feel free to supply a better last line!
     
  3. Will it ever end?
    Daffodils still buttoned up
    Spring surely sometime
     
  4. Team orders sunshine
    It isn't all about you
    Now shut up and drive
     
  5. ’Tis a strange serpent
    And the tears of it are wet.
    What manner of thing?


    [The answer is a crocodile]
     
    #285 Pete1950, Mar 26, 2013
    Last edited: Mar 28, 2013
  6. Homunculus I
    Strange grammar sagely speaking
    The Force with me is
     
  7. Compass needle spins
    Wavers confused, then steadies
    Magnet drawn northwards.
     
  8. Dreaming while asleep
    Temporarily insane
    Wake to the sane world.
     
  9. In my head in bed
    Twentieth Century Fox
    Best seat in the house
     
  10. Dreaming while asleep
    I'm temporarily sane
    Wake to insane world


    (Ack. to Pete1950)
     
  11. Excellent. I was hoping somebody would do the counter-haiku to the "sane world" one.
     
  12. Mud and runny bogs
    Musical communion
    Glastonbury time
     
  13. Beans are straggling up
    Seminal multipliers
    Kilos of fresh food
     
  14. Tritons and Tribsas
    Black leather fringes and studs
    Rockers club old style.
     
  15. Red hot cannon ball
    Cold gaping muzzle loader
    It won’t go in, Sir.
     
  16. Vandal block of flats
    Boarded, soot stained, windows smashed
    Empty eye sockets.
     
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