Guys, I have had her running!! I tried on the new earth I got from Halfords, and just tried to start her ( while the box was loose) and she jumped into action!! So that could mean 2 things, either the earth broke first time round, or something was being pinched when it was all tightened up. Good news is it isn't because I did something wrong haha! I have spoken to the guy I got the leads from and he is going to send me another set (the ones from halfords are a bit long) so it will be a few days before she is in one piece, but at least I know I haven't fried anything! Thank you all for your help by the way! I will post when she is one piece (and with her new carbon top fairing too) in a few days!
While you've got it apart check if it has the newer sealed fuel pump relay, if it hasn't I'd change it seeing as they're cheap and its all in bits already. And if you're going touring I'd buy a spare too. Great you got it running!
